User talk:Alanduval/sandbox

Team C's sandbox is definitely in good shape and it is clear that there has been extensive research and time put into those two paragraphs. Their page is organized and easy to navigate, and the sources they used have a uniform citation that was done correctly. Overall their page has a neutral voice; in the second paragraph it strays from that a little in the beginning, but the ending facts and numbers re-enhance the neutrality of the page. They did a great job at having a clear subject and stayed on track with their writing. This page is meets all of the criteria that we need to have done at this point and they have successful completed the task of having a well-thought out and organized sandbox. Grade: 5/5

Eliza Sniatkowski 1234 (talk) 18:17, 20 November 2014 (UTC)Eliza Sniatkowski 1234

Team C's sandbox is looking like something i would reference unlike my own. It seemed as though they understood all of the layers to this challenge and met every one of them. There subject matter is full on content and the overall way they put everything together was great. grade 5/5 --Liannahosein (talk) 21:43, 24 November 2014 (UTC)