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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (July 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Still too advert-toned and unconvincing thus this still needs all additional in-depth third-party news sources; no press releases, interviews, news about funding, social media profiles or trivial passing mentions.

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SwisterTwister talk 16:10, 27 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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16:12, 27 July 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (July 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Orlebar Brown, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please do not create multiple copies of drafts. Please either work on the version in draft space, or request deletion of the version in draft space and work on this version. This draft still reads like an advertisement.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 16:51, 28 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Orlebar Brown (August 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This is an interesting one because, yes, there are sources listed, but putting aside the ones that are about their business activities such as "expanding" and other activities such as celebrity partnerships, there's still not enough substance; focus with adding news that is in-depth third-party news sources; remember, and I mention this to simply note, no press releases, trivial passing mentions, news about funding or finances or also interviews.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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SwisterTwister talk 20:55, 3 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Orlebar Brown has been accepted

Orlebar Brown, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Sionk (talk) 18:45, 24 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]