User talk:AdaezeNoble313
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Hello, I'm Arjayay. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Human trafficking in Nigeria, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. - Arjayay (talk) 17:35, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
Adaeze's Peer Review
[edit]I think it is good that the introduction provided a background for terms used within the drag community to allow for the user to become familiar with them. Along with this it draws the reader in by presenting the societal impact and overall importance of drag early on. It may be beneficial to add a little background on how homosexuality is viewed within African cultures or just South African and Kenya. There is a sentence at the end saying an African person is still African even if they participate in drag. The sentence is impactful, but with that background knowledge on the negative perceptions of homosexuality in African communities it would help tie together the introduction well.
I enjoy the section on South Africa, and the conversation around how drag has been a huge part of the transition from an apartheid state. However, I would love to see a little information on the artist themselves (such as Pieter-Dirk Uys). I really love how it's touched on the political impact that drag can have. I think it would be important to possibly add some laws or cultural norms that make it important for drag as a form of expression and protest.
I am very interested to see how you expand on drag in Kenya. It seems to be polar opposite in a lot of ways from drag culture in South Africa, because of more restrictions. I would love to see you guys give that historical background and also show how drag has grown under opression!
Overall I really love this article topic and I can't wait to see it all come together. AdaezeNoble313 (talk) 21:08, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
Adaeze's Peer Review Child Marriage S.Sudan
[edit]I like that you all added a section on the health consequences regarding child marriage. I think this could be expanded on even more, and possibly regarding health mental health could be included as well. Possibly for the education section it could be expanded in the impacts socially as well. The section discussing the advocation of women in South Sudan could have a little more background as in what ways this has been done and what laws and practices are being challenged, etc. I do think it provides more clarity, but it also makes the reader want even more detail because more questions are raised. I think the topic is really interesting and with these details and information added the article will be strong. AdaezeNoble313 (talk) 21:27, 3 April 2022 (UTC)