User talk:Achild2/sandbox

Good job. Keep it up! AdamCF87 (talk) 17:34, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

How's the draft coming along? Feel free to drop me a line if you'd like me to review what you've got so far. AdamCF87 (talk) 14:19, 9 November 2017 (UTC)

Hi, I'm Ashley and I have been assigned to peer review your draft article! After reading through some of the additions you have made to the xDNA page I have some feedback. First, I would like to start off by saying it is very well organized in the way it is structured. Although I feel like there should be additional research done to further expand on certain sections like the "Origin" section. There are a good amount of links you have added to other Wikipedia pages which is insightful. As an add on I would like to suggest maybe a picture as well for structure could benefit the reader. Other than that I would suggest just reading it over out loud after it's all done because there are a few sentences where the wording could be put better/minor grammar errors. Other than that, it is a great draft and was well written - I was able to understand what you were trying to convey and teach me through the article! Great job! Ashley Young (talk) 02:01, 28 November 2017 (UTC)