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Wikipedia Extra Credit Week 2 Assignment (4/1-4/7) - Aaronqjm[edit]
Left-behind children in China Review.
1. Everything in the article is relevant to the article topic. However, there are some grammar mistakes that need to correct.
2. The topic is neutral. However, there are some points that I do not agree with. Firstly, there are not industrial revolution in China, while there is a Reform and Open Policy published in 1978. In addition to that, people can not only enjoy social welfare in their hometown, but they also have certain welfare offered even if they migrate to other areas. However, the welfare is much worse than people who live in register household location.
3. Yes. There are some underrepresented viewpoints. For example, there are changes apply to the problem occur among left-behind children. However, the situation is still serious. The author obviously underrepresent the situation.
4. The citation works. However, there are many arguments that need references to support. The author can not just make up by himself/herself. Aaronqjm (talk) 22:53, 12 April 2018 (UTC)