User talk:Aalmeidadeol2015
Good Morning! I just reviewed your article on Angiotensin (1-7), and I thought it was well organized. One suggestion that I have to improve the article is to discuss the effect of Angiotensin (1-7) on the kidneys. It is mentioned briefly in the first paragraph that Angiotensin (1-7) effects the heart, blood vessels, and kidneys. The article later addresses how it effects the heart and blood vessels, but not the kidneys. It might help answer some questions that viewers would have. Overall I think the article is well done, and I especially love the synthesis pathway.
Nroberson (talk) 08:52, 22 October 2017 (UTC)
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