User talk:A Bhagwandin/sandbox
Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
Name of student reviewer: User: Cgchapman
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Date of review: 05/10/2013
Name of editor: User: A Bhagwandin
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URL of editor’s Userpage: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:A_Bhagwandin/sandbox
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: 05/10/2013
Date review submitted to instructor:
Length of edit (too long/too short): Good length
Image (needed/appropriate): Not needed
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Edit information accurate to textbook
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych): Edit information accurate and relevant to I/O Psychology
Wikiformatting: Good Formatting
Grammar & composition: Good grammer
Other comments:None
Cgchapman (talk) 16:05, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
| Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: Keronica Grant | Date of review | 5/08/2013 |
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| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: A_Bhagwandin | ||
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:A_Bhagwandin/sandbox
review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page || 5/08/2013 | ||
| Date review submitted to instructor | 5/8/13 | ||
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | too long | ||
| Image (needed/appropriate) | N/A | ||
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | The information is accurate | ||
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | N/A | ||
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | The topic information was relevant to I/O Psych but the information need a page number and only one source. | ||
| Wikiformatting | add bullets or numbers to make it clear | ||
| Grammar & composition | |||
| Other comments | The sentence structure is too long. Try to break up your sentence by adding bullets and numbers so it could look organized. Also you need to cite your where you got your information from by providing the page number from the text book |
| Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: A_Bhagwandin | Date of review | 5/08/2013 |
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| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: VIMMYSEAJATAN | ||
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:A_Bhagwandin/sandbox
review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page || 5/08/2013 | ||
| Date review submitted to instructor | |||
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | too long | ||
| Image (needed/appropriate) | image not needed | ||
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | The information provided need a page number from the text book | ||
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | N/A | ||
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | The topic information was relevant to I/O Psych but the information need a page number and only one source. | ||
| Wikiformatting | add bullets or numbers to make it clear | ||
| Grammar & composition | -"Alcoholism is defined as an illness characterized by an inability to control the consumption of alcohol to the extent that intoxication is inevitable once drinking". Try adding "dunking" | ||
| Other comments | very long add bullets or numbers to make it clear |
| Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: A_Bhagwandin | Date of review | 5/08/2013 |
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| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: Aman11040 | ||
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:A_Bhagwandin/sandbox
review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page || 5/08/2013 | ||
| Date review submitted to instructor | 5/08/2013 | ||
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Good Length | ||
| Image (needed/appropriate) | image not needed | ||
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | It is accurate | ||
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | Yes | ||
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | Accurate to I/O Psych | ||
| Wikiformatting | Good Formatting | ||
| Grammar & composition | - good Grammar | ||
| Other comments | No other comments |
Aman11040 (talk) 03:39, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
| Name of student reviewer Ramnel Cortorreal-Rosario User:CRamel16 | Date of review | 5/09/2013 |
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| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: CRamel16 | |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:A_Bhagwandin/sandbox
review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page || 5/09/2013 | |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 5/09/2013 | |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Good Length | |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | image not needed | |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | very accurate | |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | Yes it is | |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | Accurate to subject | |
| Wikiformatting | Decent Formatting | |
| Grammar & composition | - good Grammar | |
| Other comments | Good Work |
[[User:CRamel16 (talk) 04:52, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
Pre edit peer review
[edit]| Name of student reviewer | Wikipedia User: Joan Bailey |
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| Date of review | 5/09/2013 |
| Name of editor | Wikipedia User:A Bhagwandin |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:A_Bhagwandin |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 05/15/13 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 05/15/13 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | The length of the edit is not too long. It is a good amount. |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | No image is needed. |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | Textbook information is accurately edited. |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | The information was taken from a book and not an article. But the book is about alcoholism and the workplace. |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | The information presented is related to I/O Psychology. |
| Wikiformatting | The formatting adheres to wikiformatting. |
| Grammar & composition | Grammar and composition is okay. |
| Other comments | The edits were simple and to the point. Terms were defined and some statistics were included. |