User talk:AFe Power

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Excirial^{(Contact me,Contribs)} 20:52, 19 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Kevin Rutherford (talk) 00:51, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Updated Article Page (Pending)

Hi Excirial,

Thanks for your first message, I've gone added links and references to the aFe page. My user name is Indikawijesekera. Please let me know if the revised is acceptable.

Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by AFe Power (talk • contribs) 23:14, 19 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hiyas there Indikawijesekera,

I see that another editors already reviewed the article in the meantime, and personally i try to evade reviewing the same page multiple times in a row. Having said that - a few quick pointers for the page:

If possible, use inline citations for your references - this makes it a lot easier for readers to check which source is used for each section of the article. Some help on how to do this is availible here and here.
Don't use external links in the main article body, and specially not if they link to the subjects website - this is seen as link spamming. External links should go in the external links section, if they are considered relevant
Try keeping peacock wording out, and watch out for a general promotional tone in the article. There are a few of those words and combined with the "Achievements" section the article has a rather promotional tone.
And a small finisher: External links use single brackets, internal links double (The references / External links section has double brackets whereas it should use single brackets. Really minor issue of course :) )

Hope this helps, and with kind regards, Excirial^{(Contact me,Contribs)} 17:14, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Topher385 (talk) 02:58, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 16:23, 27 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome to Wikipedia: check out the Teahouse!

Hello! AFe Power, you are invited to the Teahouse, a forum on Wikipedia for new editors to ask questions about editing Wikipedia, and get support from peers and experienced editors. Please join us!

I, and the rest of the hosts, would be more than happy to answer any questions you have! SarahStierch (talk) 18:00, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

In response to your feedback

Your AfC submission has been denied because it reads more like an advertisement rather than an encyclopedia article. Please visit Wikipedia:Writing better articles and Wikipedia:Neutral point of view.

SwisterTwister talk 19:07, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Username

Welcome to Wikipedia. I saw how you edited or created Advanced FLOW engineering (aFe Power), and I noticed that the username you have chosen, "AFe Power", seems to imply that you are editing on behalf of a group, company or website. Please note that Wikipedia does not allow usernames that are promotional or appear to be shared by multiple people. Please take a moment to create a new account or request a username change that represents only yourself as an individual. You should also read our conflict of interest guideline and remember that promotional editing is not acceptable regardless of the username you choose. If you believe that your username does not violate our policy, please leave a note here explaining why. Thank you.}} --Drm310 (talk) 21:42, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This account has been blocked indefinitely from editing Wikipedia because your username, AFe Power, does not meet our username policy.

Your username is the only reason for this block. You are welcome to choose a new username (see below).

A username should not be promotional, related to a "real-world" group or organization, misleading, offensive, or disruptive. Also, usernames may not end in the word "bot" unless the account is an approved bot account.

You are encouraged to choose a new account name that meets our policy guidelines. Alternatively, if you have already made edits and you wish to keep your existing contributions under a new name, then you may request a change in username by:

Adding {{unblock-un|your new username here}} on your user talk page. You should be able to do this even though you are blocked, as you can usually still edit your own talk page. If not, you may wish to contact the blocking administrator by clicking on "E-mail this user" on their talk page.
At an administrator's discretion, you may be unblocked for 24 hours to file a request.
Please note that you may only request a name that is not already in use, so please check here for a listing of already taken names. The account is created upon acceptance, thus do not try to create the new account before making the request for a name change. For more information, please see Wikipedia:Changing username.

If you feel that you were blocked in error, you may appeal this block by adding below this notice the text {{unblock|Your reason here}}, but you should read our guide to appealing blocks first.

Daniel Case (talk) 03:16, 16 August 2012 (UTC) Thanks for the feedback.[reply]

This user's request to be unblocked to request a change in username has been reviewed by an administrator, who declined the request. Other administrators may also review this block, but should not override the decision without a good reason (see the blocking policy). Do not remove this unblock review while you are blocked.

AFe Power (block log • active blocks • global blocks • autoblocks • contribs • deleted contribs • filter log • creation log • change block settings • unblock • checkuser (log))

Requested username:

E-automods (talk · contribs · deleted contribs · logs · filter log · block user · block log)

Decline reason:

Below you state "wrote it in an unbiased way" and mention an impact, however your article neither is neutral nor has references to establish notablility. From this I have to conclude that you actually don't understand our policies mentioned by Hersfold and unblocking you will not help improve the encyclopedia. Max Semenik (talk) 18:55, 16 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I would like to change my username to "E-automods" How would I go about doing this?

A bureaucrat will have to change your name for you once you are unblocked; you are not able to do so yourself. First, though, Here are a few key questions:

Do you understand that Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and not a business directory?
Do you understand conflict of interest?
Do you understand that to be considered for an encyclopedia article, the subject must be notable?

You are currently blocked because your username appears directly related to a company, group or product that you have been promoting, contrary to the username policy. Changing the username will not allow you to violate the 3 important principles above. Hersfold non-admin^(t/a/c) 15:48, 16 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Thank you for the information. To answer your questions I am aware and understand the rules required to have an article on Wiki. I wrote it in an unbiased way because of the impact this organization has had world wide. They are not just talked and known about in the US, but also well known in the Middle East, Canada, Europe and S. America. I accidentally choose that username (aFe Power) since I thought it had to be associated with the article and no other reason. If I can use the username E-automods that would be great.

I have included notable references. Please look at the ones I stated from published magazines that has covered this organization. I made an error in choosing a username that was similar to the subject being covered. I know now that it cannot reflect the organization being discussed. Changing the name to E-automods would fall into an acceptable username. If I used the "wrong words" I apologize. I just wanted to write about a notable organization. Thank you.