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Your submission at Articles for creation: Founding Fathers of Pakistan (November 28)

Your recent article submission has been rejected and cannot be resubmitted. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Remsense was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: Seems totally redundant to List of Pakistan Movement activists.

Remsense ‥ 论 06:38, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, 2A00:23A8:41FF:C901:5452:D1DD:8687:6573! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Remsense ‥ 论 06:38, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: India (disambiguation) (November 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Qcne were:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The proposed article does not have sufficient content to require an article of its own, but it could be merged into the existing article at India (disambiguation). Since anyone can edit Wikipedia, you are welcome to add that information yourself. Thank you.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The first few paragraphs are unencyclopedic. e.g. "Are you Confused? You should be!". The Wikipedia voice should never address the reader in a superlative fashion.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:India (disambiguation) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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qcne (talk) 10:06, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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