User talk:223.179.201.250
Hi there- Look, you have had several people undoing your edits already; how about listening to them and following some advice? You may be a native of Jorhat, and know the place very well, but you dont know about writing articles. You need to reference eveything you put in an article. That doesnt mean you tell other people to go look it up! that means you give them the information, after each piece of information you put in. Apart from that, you are putting way to much detailed information in the first paragraph. The first paragraph of the article, known as the lead or lede, is like an introduction to the article; it should have no new information, but just summarise the information in the rest of the article. So all the stuff you are putting in really needs its own subsesection in the main body of the article, with references. see WP:REFB (referencing for beginners) if you dont know how to do it properly. Curdle (talk) 11:47, 30 June 2018 (UTC)
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