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Ztluce

Cuisine of the Southern United States

Add a header to the fried chicken topic (if its its own section if not then your good)

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Think about adding some media, unless there is already a large amount of it on the page already

Content

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Guiding questions:

  • Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes
  • Is the content added up-to-date? Yes as good as it can be
  • Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? everything seems to belong

I would recommend adding an example to the stereotypes about African Americans and Fried Chicken.

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Tone and Balance

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Guiding questions:

  • Is the content added neutral? yes
  • Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? no
  • Are there viewpoints that are over represented, or underrepresented? not really
  • Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? nope

Good job at staying neutral, (I mean is there really a hard controversy on fried chicken)

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Sources and References

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Guiding questions:

  • Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? yes
  • Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yes
  • Are the sources current? as current as they can be there are some from 2018
  • Check a few links. Do they work? yes

A good amount of sources, The listing of the regional cuisines could use some more sources near the end and beginning

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Organization

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Guiding questions:

  • Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? yes
  • Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? not that I could see
  • Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes

The organization is pretty good you start with the origin and build off of that, so keep on doing that with your editing.

This is overall a pretty good article so far, I would just say too keep adding a couple more facts and citations to make sure you hit the mark for grading.