User:Zport20
Top 5 Articles
[edit]
- The origin is good, but the history of the toy stops at 1940, more history and context provided will give users a better sense of where the Magic 8-Ball came from
- The chart that gives the possible answers could be updated to read a little easier
- There should be a section on who manufactures the balls today and links to those respective companies through Wikipedia
- Some of the popular culture references are a bit outdated, updating this with current popular culture references will mean more to the audience
- Text could be condensed as there are a lot of long blocks of text with a lot of information
- More pictures should be included (and make the current ones bigger)
- Break up the contents to include sub-contents which would make the page easier to read
- Add a little more information to the lead so the audience gets a sense for what the article contains
 | This user is a student editor in Texas_AM/Technical_Editing_(Spring_2020). |