User:Yyskye/Hannah Wilke

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Wiki Edits : Hannah Wilke Article

Edits in "Critical Recognition" Section:

- Some bias in paragraph. "During her lifetime, Wilke was widely exhibited, and although controversial, received critical praise." Writer states work is controversial, has no source stating so/ sounds like personal opinion. Could be worded better so avoid stating as a fact.

Edit To : "During her lifetime, Wilke was widely exhibited and received critical praise while also viewed as controversial."

- "Wilke's work, with its confrontational use of female sexuality and the fact that it does not fit into a distinct genre or style, was in very few permanent collections when she was alive." No source to provide the "fact" that Wilke's work doesn't fit into a genre/style. Could be worded differently to transition into next points.

Edit To : "While still alive, Wilke's work was in a few permanent collections, showcasing the confrontational use of the female sexuality."