User:YG061617
Bio
[edit]Hello, friends (OR ALL) ! My name is Yvonne Gomez. I am an outgoing, responsible, and caring person. I currently live in Mukilteo, WA with my husband. I am a full time worker and student. I do inventory control at Funko. I've been working at Funko for 3 years. Also, attend school over at Everett Community College, pursuing a direct transfer to Seattle Pacific University. During my free time, I enjoy spending time with my family, studying, and cleaning my home. I am a fan of power rangers. My favorite character is the yellow ranger, as well that my favorite color is yellow. Lastly, I enjoy collecting Funko pops ( Disney, anime, and tv shows).
I have only used Wikipedia whenever I was curious about knowing a celebrity's biography. I never had an account. I'm excited to use Wikipedia and start editing peoples pages, read articles, and learn what Wikipedia is all about.
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Articule Review
[edit]I have been a part of Funko for the past 3 years. I find Funko a great company who is growing and succeeding.I've seen Funko treat their workers the same and it's a pleasure to be part of Funko's culture. Overall, looking up Funko's page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: not many links, lack of structure, and information cited repeatedly in the source.
Citations
[edit]There are a few amounts of citations in the article. In the article each paragraph that talked about Funkos success and work, each had citations and references repeatably that were used throughout the article.
Links
[edit]The article does provide a link to allow readers to visit Funko’s official website. And explore Funko’s product culture including actions figures, vinyl figures, activity toys, plushes, apparel, and exclusives action figures. however, this could be more improved by citing more valuable information and reliable resources.
Structure
[edit]Funko's article structure could be improved. The sections of the article includes the importance of Funkos success and purchases but carries a few information. Not enough support and development. A good structure is to have a format using paragraphs involving evidence. In the sections of productions and collector box subscriptions could be explained into more details and evidence. The information could be explained well to the readers allow them to understand well what product Funko carries.
Summary
[edit]Overall, this article is a "good" page. It allows readers to understand Funkos history, growth, and production. However, there were cites repeatedly through the article and had one linked. Which could give readers questions about where Funkos products could be found. Also, this article could use improvement and organization about Funkos products and production. which, could help readers where can Funko products be found and what products do Funko sell and create.
As part of this assignment, I also posted a question on the talk page of the concertina page hereTalk:Funko
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