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== Article evaluation ==

"HIV/AIDS Epidemiology"

  • Not everything I found in the article relates to the topic.
  • The article is not neutral in the sense that the topic is ‘Epidemiology of HIV/AIDS’ and the introduction described it as a pandemic disease. However, there seem to be more concentration on the African countries as compared to the other countries in the world.
  • Some of the viewpoints are overrepresented.
  • Most of the links in the article do not work. They are dead. Some of the sources also do not support the claims in the article.
  • Some of the facts in the article lack citations. Others are also not referenced appropriately with reliable sources.
  • The article is rated C class, an intermediate article.
  • The article as a whole needs an update. Some of the information is out of date.


Article contribution

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"Keith Haring"

  • I will make a couple of contributions to this article.
  • I will add additional information to the life of Keith Haring.
  • I will also add some more information to the work he did.
  • I will add more to how Keith Haring acquired the HIV/AIDS and the impact that the disease had on his life and career.


Bibliography

LaPierre, S. (2017). Keith Haring: The Boy Who Just Keeps Drawing. School Library Journal, 63(1), 107-110.

Montez, R. (2006). "Trade" Marks: LA2, Keith Haring, and a Queer Economy of Collaboration. GLQ: A Journal of Lesbian and Gay Studies 12(3), 425-440. Duke University Press. Retrieved November 8, 2017, from Project MUSE database.

Natalie, E. Phillips. (2007). "American Art" 21, no. 3: The Radiant (Christ) Child: Keith Haring and the Jesus Movement, 54-73.

Tseng, M. & Chong, P. (2000). SlutForArt. PAJ: A Journal of Performance and Art 22(1), 111-128. The MIT Press. Retrieved November 8, 2017, from Project MUSE database.

Contributing to article and improving it

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"Chinese Exclusion Act"

  • I will add citations from reliable sources to some parts of this article.
  • I will add some more information to the background and content.
  • I will also discuss the current status of the Act

Bibliography

H. Mark Lai (1982) The Chinese Exclusion Act: Observations of a Centennial. Amerasia Journal: 1982, Vol. 9, No. 1, pp. 1-4

Joyce J. Chen, "The Impact of Skill-Based Immigration Restrictions: The Chinese Exclusion Act of 1882," Journal of Human Capital 9, no. 3 (Fall 2015): 298-328110

Lee, E. "Closing the Gate: Race, Politics, and the Chinese Exclusion Act (review)." Journal of Interdisciplinary History, vol. 30 no. 4, 2000, pp. 713-714. Project MUSE

Matsumoto, Mieko. Chinese Exclusion Act. (2013, March 19). Densho Encyclopedia. Retrieved 12:32, November 10, 2017 from http://encyclopedia.densho.org/Chinese%20Exclusion%20Act/.

'Article Improvement"

There are some information that have missing citations so I will add the necessary citations.

I will work on how punctuations have used inappropriately.