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Strengths:

Covered material all seems relevant to the article. The article mostly succeeds at taking on an objective tone. It's an enjoyable article.

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  • "A shortened version of NEO PI-R has been published. The shortened version is the NEO Five-Factor Inventory (NEO-FFI)"

Avoiding plagiarism

  • Edit under Cross Cultural Research section for close wording, here: "Their findings were consistent with idea of the rough equivalence of NEO PI-R five factors and facets across cultures. They suggested that aggregate personality profiles provide insight into cultural differences"

Changing to objective tone

  • Consider making the attribution to the study more explicit under the Alternate Versions section, second paragraph.