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This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.

Name of article: (Adam's apple)
Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate. Went randomly into anatomy, so picked adam's apple since it looked interesting to have a full article about it

Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Yes, it provides a brief and clear definition of an adam's apple.
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
No, it does not.
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
No, it stays in the relevant information.
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
It is sufficiently concise.

Is the article's content relevant to the topic?
The content is all relevant.
Is the content up-to-date?
From the info that I cross referenced from the NCBI, it seems the content is up-to-date to 2018.
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
No, everything that is lead into is there.
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
This topic is not particularly suited for this.

Is the article neutral?
The article is neutral in tone and position.
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
There seem to be no biases that I read.
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Any opposing viewpoints are presented equally.
Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
There is no persuasive element to this article.

Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Though the sources seem to be accurate and thorough, they do not seem to be reliable sources.
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
The lengthier source I found cited was in spanish, even though my medical vocabulary lacks, from what I could tell it is thorough
Are the sources current?
Several are from the wayback machine, so they are not
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
It seems it was a multilingual undertaking, with sources in English, Spanish, and Russian, but history only loosely ties into this article, and it is handled to the extent it needs to be.
Check a few links. Do they work?
They do, but they are old sites and not reliable sources of information.

Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
It is well written, and readable
Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors?
I did not catch any on my read throughs.
Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
It breaks down into a few sections that describe different aspects of the topic well.

What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?
The talk page has been silent for two years, but the last conversation was about why men would or wouldn't have as prominent adam's apples, and how one user was glad he didn't have one
How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?
It is a class C article that relates to the WikiProject on anatomy
How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?
I only just realized that this article was supposed to be related to the class, and have now put too much effort to cross reference and check as many sources for a second one, so I'll just take the points off

What is the article's overall status?
The article is complete, if a bit stagnant by this point
What are the article's strengths?
It has accurate data and shows different arguments about the etymology of the adam's apple
How can the article be improved?
Its sources need to be upgraded to more reliable and newer sources
How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed?
It is well developed on the front end, but the back end veered off topic a lot and has not seen any recent activity

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