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Which article are you evaluating?

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(Microecology)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?

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(I am a biologist and evaluating this article can make me contribute my knowledge to improve Wikipedia with respect to ecology)



Evaluate the article

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(Lead section: Article topic well defined with the definition of the article topic beginning with the article topic itself and in bold. The explanation of the lead was good but it could have been better as some aspect of the topic was briefly explained in the lead whiles others were not. Areas of microecology such as human gut microecology was briefly explained however, how microecology relates to biology, evolution, biodiversity and its application in the field of agriculture and biotechnology were not briefly explained here.

Content : The article does not possess detailed explanation of the various scope, areas and application of microecology ( such as evolution, exobiology, food microbiology, agriculture biotechnology, gut microbiology etc) mentioned in the lead section. Although the author talked about microecology in the urban context, it was also not detailed enough.

Tone and balance: The article talked more on gut microecology than the remaining aspect of microecology stated by the author in the lead section.

Sources and References: Some important statements made in this article lacks concrete evidence or reference backing them. Reference "1" does not reflect the available literature on the topic. Reference "3" not current. Few links that were checked were working.

Organization and Writing : Article is concise, clear and easy to read however, It is not well organized and lacks detailed explanation of the major areas stated in the lead section.For example, the author talked about the application of microecology in the field of medicine, agriculture, biotechnology and design but did not give detailed explanation on these. No grammatical error was detected in the article.

Images and Media: This article lacks images and media making it less appreciative by the reader.

Talk Page discussion : Article has been edited in terms of grammatical corrections, punctuation,deletion and insertion of of both in text citation and external references. Dead links that were provided by the writer has also been removed by some editors. Detailed information on some aspect has also been added to the article be some editors.

Overall Impression: The article is easy to understand however most aspects of the article were not deeply explained. No image or media was added to the article making it less appreciative to the reader. This article can be improved by providing detailed section of the scope, application etc. aspects of microecology stated in the lead. Also addition of well captioned and good images will enable the reader to understand the article very well. Overall, the article is underdeveloped and lacks some detailed information)