User:Tashany.Velazquez/Las Catalinas Mall/Keniett J. Vazquez Peer Review
Peer review
[edit]Lead
[edit]I am reviewing the work of: User:Tashany.Velazquez
Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Tashany.Velazquez/Las Catalinas Mall
Lead evaluation
[edit]The lead of the article is concise, easy to read, and understand. It includes an introductory sentence that reflects the main topic of the article, in this case, Las Catalinas Mall. All the principal aspects mentioned are currently available in it.
Content evaluation
[edit]The content added to the article is relevant to the topic since it is information about who was one of the largest owners of Las Catalinas Mall, a person who is part of the history of the shopping center. The information of the added content is from the year 2019, like most of the aggregated sources, the information can be classified as recent, but it is not completely updated. The added content belongs to the history of this place and is available in its respective section. I think it would be a good idea to add a section or table directed to statistical data about Las Catalinas Mall, shopping statistics, sales ranking, economic impact, or some other topic related to the mall (if possible). Finally, this article does not address issues related to historically underrepresented populations or problems.
Note: Currently, there is no article in Wikipedia about Bartolomé Borrás, for this reason, the "link" appears in red. I believe that this link should be removed, or another option would be to create an article about it personally.
Tone and balance evaluation
[edit]The content added to this article is neutral. It does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another.
Sources and references evaluation
[edit]New content is supported by a trusted secondary source of information. The sources of information are from the year 2019, so they are recent, but they are not fully updated. One of them reflects the available literature on the added topic, another presents the meaning of a word from the article, and the last contains the map of the Las Catalinas Shopping Center. Information about one of the mall's owners is included. Finally, the available links work perfectly.
Organization evaluation
[edit]The content added to the article is well written, concise, clear, and easy to read. It does not contain any grammatical or spelling errors. The added information was located in its respective section.
Images and media evaluation
[edit]The article includes an image of the Las Catalinas Mall logo with important information about the place as: location, coordinates, address, website, among others. I understand that the image complies with Wikipedia's copyright regulations. Although the article is not abundant in content, I think it could be structured so that at least one more photo is added, either of the parking lot of the place, the architecture (plan or map), or a photo of the Las Catalinas Mall, complying with the Wikipedia copyright regulations. The image that is currently in is present in a visually appealing way and is well placed according to the current content that the article contains.
Overall evaluation
[edit]For general evaluation, this article is well structured and contains information relevant to the article. The sources are accessible and reliable. The added content is relevant to the topic. The improvement of the article seems interesting to me, even knowing that it is limited in information, but that it is well developed.