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User:SherifaOsman/Ahmad Sah l Bahmani Mausoleum/Hganaini Peer Review

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General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

SherifaOsman

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:SherifaOsman/Ahmad_Sah_l_Bahmani_Mausoleum?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted change

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This Wikipedia article is well structured. The lead section is easy to understand and very brief for a non expert. It gives also a balanced coverage to the monument's architecture, patron and history with neutral content. The author sources are not clear yet, it needs to be cited. The article also needs images and maps to make it easier to understand and delve into the topic. Overall, the article is well structured and organized but it needs more citation and visuals.

Lead

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The lead section is well-organized and brief.

Content

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The tomb description section needs to be divided into other sections to make it easier to navigate; exterior, interior and decoration.

Tone and Balance

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It was neutral and unbiased.

Sources and References

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It still needs its citation.

Organization

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The author may need to categorize the "other" section into smaller sections.

The article needs to link other articles.

Images and Media

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This article needs using more images and maps of Ahmed Shah I Bahmani Mausoleum.