User:Sammy521/sandbox
Article Evaluation[edit]
Article reviewed:
The Estee Lauder article was relevant to the article topic and provided a detailed history, background and brands the Company is associated with. The article was not distracting and was well organized. The article was also pretty much up to date and links were properly working. References were also properly documented.
Some possible recommendations for the Estee Lauder (EL) article:
· Create a section for EL stock price so it’s easier for the reader to read or put a title labeled “EL” to link to the current share price after the Financials section so it shows the Current Market Price of Estee Lauder.
· Add a detailed section about Ester Lauder’s Global presence as well. For example, Ester Lauder’s success not only in the US specifically in NYC but worldwide in France, London, and China. Some detailed information on their global success would also be interesting in learning about.
Copyedit article[edit]
The article I made minor edits to was Ulta Beauty.
I made some minor changes that included adding a period to a very long sentence and two commas that were missing. Here is the differences page:
https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Ulta_Beauty&type=revision&diff=902591963&oldid=898457725
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