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This is my evaluation of the article about Jacobello del Fiore. While this article does have a good amount of information, too much of it is subjective, and the sources could be more diversified. Some of the articles on the list of articles that us students were given to evaluate merely consist of one paragraph with grammatical errors and no pictures. This article is superior to those, but is not yet on the polished level of the pages of some more famous or notable renaissance artists. It seems that in some places, the author was just trying to fill up space or add "fluff" to the article. If that fluff were replaced with more pertinent information from a more diverse breadth of sources, a more holistic view of Jacobello del Fiore could be presented.
Drafting for Jacobello del Fiore Article Improvement
[edit]Information Missing From the Article in its Current Condition
[edit]-Examples of works
-Legacy
-Comparisons to his comtemporaries
-The broader movements that he was a part of and that his art fell into, stylistically and in content.
Resources Available for Information
[edit]-Lily and Perkins Library
-Online databases
-Information given during lectures and FOCUS dinners
-One-on-one meeting with Lee
-WikiEdu training
-Google Scholar