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You will be compiling your bibliography and creating an outline of the changes you will make in this sandbox.


Bibliography

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Edit this section to compile the bibliography for your Wikipedia assignment. Add the name and/or notes about what each source covers, then use the "Cite" button to generate the citation for that source.

  • Pennell, S. (1999). Consumption and Consumerism in Early Modern England. The Historical Journal, 42(2), 549–564. http://www.jstor.org/stable/3021000
    • Is from a notable journal article, published by a recognizable University press - making this a reliable source. Relevance to subject matter as well.
  • Gibson, A. (2011). Ideas and Practices in the Critique of Consumerism. Environmental Philosophy, 8(2), 171–188. [1]
    • Is from a notable journal article, making this a reliable source. Furthermore, covers a subtopic mentioned in the article.
  • Valkenburg, P. (2000). Media and youth consumerism. Journal of Adolescent Health, 27(2), 52 -56. https://doi.org/10.1016/S1054-139X(00)00132-4
    • Refers to another subsection of the article and considers the impacts of digital consumerism. Is a recognizable journal article as well.

References

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Outline of proposed changes

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  • The proposed changes largely focus on the lack of citations, with reference to some of the statements made in the article. While there is a detailed exploration of many ideas and perspectives there are statements made that aren't backed up by facts or statistics. Multiple unsupported attributions need to be addressed.
  • To improve overall clarity and cohesiveness the dates and numbers also need to be further refined, added and cross checked.
  • Crosschecking of some of the mentioned facts and ideas. Further refinement of structure of some of the subheadings, with in-depth exploration of multiple topics. These could possibly be rearranged to make the current test more cohesive as whole.
  • The sentence structure in some paragraphs could be improved to decrease ambiguity.
  • There are some statements quite like another magazine's article that don't appear to be cited in this article, causing some of the gaps in citation.