User:Pn612/sandbox/Article Evaluation
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Notes on findings:
The Article on NYC Emergency Management does not seem to have a robust introduction. However, it is comprehensive in its overview of the OEM, and includes recent updates like the location change. There seems to be a neutral tone to this article, and the links are up to date and seem to have more connected citations, allowing the reader to explore this topic further if needed. However, I feel as though there is a need to add more about the role of the OEM in connection to the events of 9/11, which was crucially instrumental to the change of the location.