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Article critique
[edit]https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/CAMP-dependent_pathway This article has issues with punctuation, Very poor citation all over the article. It lacks a sufficient number of review acticles references. The sections present are very short, there are not enough information about pathology. I would add information about how cAMP is related to calcium ions. i would add a section on its synthesis in living cells. Panda95 (talk) 22:37, 23 October 2016 (UTC)