User:Palmiro/nascanna le hobair as seo amach/Palestian territories highlights
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- 6 Feabhra: agreement on talk, Humus Sapiens inserts agreed version: [1]
- 16 Marta 19.02: SlimVirgin inserts "is one of a number of terms' into the intro with the edit summary "tweak of intro": [2]
- 16 Marta 20.02: Ramallite returns to agreed version with edit summary "Per previous talk, removed unencyclopedic "is a term used to"... moved awkward Jerusalem reference a little south": [3]
- 16 Marta 20.08: SlimVirgin reinserts "is one of a number of terms" with edit summary "used to describe is more accurate": [4]
- 28 March: Palmiro reinserts agreed version of first paragraph:[5].
- 28 March: Palmiro copyedits, moves "in the context of a Palestinian perspective" from the second sentence into the beginning of the following paragraph where differences over usage are briefly discussed: [6].
- 29 March: SlimVirgin changes first sentence to "Palestinian territories is one of a number of terms used to describe, from a Palestinian point of view, areas captured by Israel in the Six-day War of 1967,..." with edit summary "copy edit of intro": [7]; edit war ensues between SlimVirgin, Jayjg and Palmiro, ending on Jayjg's version reversion to SV's version.
- 29 March 21.54: Cybbe removes "from a Palestinian point of view", with the edit summary "it is in use by a vast amount og ¨", presumably cut short by an error: [8]
- 29 March 22.12: Sangil reinserts "from a Palestinian point of view", with the edit summary "It is still only the Palestinian viewpoint , as opposed to the Israeli one, even if not only Palestinians hold it. Pls discuss changes on the talk page first.": [9]
- 30 March 17.08: Ed Poor rewrites intro: [10]
- 30 March 22.14: SlimVirgin reverts to her last version: [11]
- 31 March, 14.55: [User:149.99.19.84] changes "from a Palestinian point of view" to "from an Arab point of view", no edit summary given: [12]
- 2 April 13.27: Palmiro changes "from an Arab point of view" to "from an Arab point of view or in the Western media" with the edit summary "the term is also used by Western media organizations who have little sympathy for the Palestinans": [13]; revert war ensues between Palmiro and SlimVirgin, ending when Sangil reverts to Slimvirgin's version.