User:P.f.n96/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article

This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.

Name of article: (link) Academic Discipline
- Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate. I chose this article because as a future educator, chemistry teacher, my job is to prepare high school students to learn the skills that are required in higher level course. Many students when they get to college have a lot of anxiety when choosing a major because they are required to decide choose a major they must master in order to graduate with a degree. This is a huge decision to make at the age of 19, bringing lots of anxiety. Not many science teachers focus on teaching the skills required to master all the objectives of the class. The teachers teach with a goal of having students pass standardized tests without making sure they understand the content and master the skills. I believe if teachers understood the importance of academic discipline and informing the students at an early stage, for example 10th grade, then it would be a much easier for them to transition from being generalist to experts as they move on to college.

Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? The lead is concise

Is the article's content relevant to the topic? yes
Is the content up-to-date? yes the last update was October 18, 2020
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No, all information is concise and relevant
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? I do not think this article speaks on historically underrepresented populations. In the history section the only thing that was mentioned was the sciences branched of into two categories, natural science discipline and social science. These encompassed other sciences with in these categories.

Is the article neutral? yes
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No
Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No

Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes
Are the sources current? Yes
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? Yes
Check a few links. Do they work? Yes

Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes to all three
Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors? No
Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes

What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic? Many people added links to articles to back up the research.
How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects? B, The article is mostly complete and without major problems but requires some further work to reach good article standards. No it Is not part of wikiProject
How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class? It does not. All the points spoken about in the module were represented.

What is the article's overall status? I think the paper was well written. In my opinion there were enough backing evidence but in the credibility section it mentioned it needed more references.
What are the article's strengths? The lay out of the article is what helps with clarity. The information is very concise and encompasses all the different sciences and how this information relates to academic discipline.
How can the article be improved? In the beginning of the article it starts with " do not confuse with school discipline" a brief explanation of how academic discipline and school disciples are different could have made that comment a little more clear.
How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed? I believe the article is well-developed.

Choose at least 1 question relevant to the article you're evaluating and leave your evaluation on the article's Talk page. Be sure to sign your feedback

with four tildes — ~~~~