User:P.Phan!pharmd26/sandbox
Review of the article Chinese food therapy
The lead section is ok, this article need to include a sentence to explain the topic of the lead section.
. The tone overall is neutral.
. The content seems to focus a lot on the origin and history of chinese food therapy, maybe there should be additional section that talk about specific examples of food and their health benefit.
. From the talk page, there are more reference sources that this article can use to help improve the article.
. Overall, the topic is interesting and the article still need more improvement.
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