User:Michellewittwer/sandbox
I plan on adding sources to this page. In the talk page someone made the comment that more sources are needed.
"developed and conducted the first training program for law enforcement officers in 1959" I plan on adding this to the section about harry Arons.
I plan on taking this out of the article "Arons was a consultant to physicians, dentists & psychologists. As a paramedical specialist, he worked in collaboration with numerous members of the medical & allied professions in New Jersey. To name only a few: Ki Ho Kim, M.D., Medical Director, Kessler Institute of Rehabilitation. West Orange, NJ (also taught Dr. Kim and his staff); Samuel Martin, M.D., Chief Psychiatrist for the Essex County (NJ) Probation Department; Harold Hansen, Ph.D., Clinical Psychologist, South Orange, NJ; Walter Nudelman, M.D., Internist, Springfield, NJ: James Joule, D.D.S., Kearny, NJ" I do not think that it adds to the article.
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<nowiki>Michelle, I agree with you that the section you wish to take out needs to be removed. Since the article should be focusing on the history of hypnosis rather than the people Harry Arons worked with, unless they greatly added to the hypnosis. But, at the time he was working with these people he was a paramedical specialist, I do not feel they helped him make a great many contributions in the history of hypnosis. Tmgonzalez (talk) 16:43, 24 April 2017 (UTC)