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Article link: Housewife
Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?
[edit]The part of housewives in the United Kingdom missed the latest information. There are introduction of housewives in different countries without Japan. In my opinion, Japan as a typical country with large percent of housewives, it's worth to be added.
Is the article neutral? Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
[edit]This article is neutral. There are not biased toward a particular position.Most of part are facts without many comments.
Check a few citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
[edit]They're not all right. I read the citation of prove that women usually work for pay throughout the history. But when i click into the passage. It just said the work-class family, women have to work during the Victorian.
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
[edit]In the education part, it said "the method, necessity, and extent of educating housewives has been debated ". This sentence require more explanation and evidence to support.