User:Mackenziebrumbaugh/Impulse purchase/Nrkjordaan Peer Review

Peer review

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

• Whose work are you reviewing? I was reviewing Mackenziebrumbaugh
• Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Mackenziebrumbaugh/Impulse purchase

Lead

Guiding questions:

• Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Not really, it doesn't seem so.
• Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
• Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
• Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Minimal, I don't think so honestly.
• Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Its short and to the point.

Content

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes
• Is the content added up-to-date? Yes it was edited 5/07/2020
• Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Missing some stuff, does not seem to have that much info.

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added neutral? Yes
• Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? Not that I can see.
• Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No, I don't think so.
• Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? Persuade.

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

• Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? I think so, Yes
• Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes there are sources.
• Are the sources current? No, most resent is 2011.
• Check a few links. Do they work? Yes they work.

Organization

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes its easy to read.
• Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Not that I have seen.
• Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes.

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

• Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
• Are images well-captioned?
• Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
• Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

• Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
• How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
• Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
• Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

• Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Article is not complete.
• What are the strengths of the content added? The intro of the article.
• How can the content added be improved? Every section needs a little improvement.