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Article Evaluation
[edit] I did my evaluation over the goddess Achlys. I found that the article stayed on topic and did not stray from what it was suppose to be. I also found that there wasn't anything to distract you from the topic. The information given would still be considered in date but I found it missing some things. I think to improve this page they should have shown a picture or representation of her on Heracles's shield. I think to also improve this the layout could be better and could use more information about how the people viewed her or how we think the people viewed her.
The article is neutral and there are no claims the appear to be towards or against what they thought of her or what we thought of her. I think that the viewpoints were underrepresented and could use alot more attention to details about her.
I checked some citations and found they work and sent me to other Wikipedia pages that talked about her and her role in society. These sources help to support the claims made in the original post. There isn't many sources but most are Wikipedia. I don't think that using only Wikipedia would be using reliable sources however the ones I looked at were very good at explaining and giving good details. These sources were also neutral.
There wasn't any conversations about the page. The article was also rated as a Stub-class by three Wikiprojects including Wikiprojects Greece, Wikiproject Classical Greece and Rome and Wikiproject Mythology. We havn't really talked about this subject in class, however I really like to learn about Mythology.
Article Selection
[edit]-Is ancient Greek mythology acceptable? If not is there any sort of mythology that would be acceptable?
1. Oceanus-god or divine figure of the sea or enormous river that encircles the world. sources- Could use a little touch up, make it easier to read through. Little more information. 2 .Hecatoncheires- Three giants who surpassed strength of the titans. sources- Maybe find some information, and make the page more user friendly. 3. Gaia- Greek primordial deitie sources- Honestly small changes if any but could use touch up with some ideas given and more information for certain parts would be nice.