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Articles for improvement

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Latvia:

  • More citations
  • More subheadings
  • References aren't all formatted correctly

Christopher Wilder:

  • Could include section detailing how he was found out
  • Some small grammatical errors
  • Lead could be longer
  • Could include section comparing him to similar serial killers
  • More credible citations


My Articles

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Problems

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  • Lead section is too long
  • "Weasel words"
  • Some broad claims in areas

To-Do List

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  • Reduce lead section (Completed 3/19/18)
    • Redistribute info that should be kept (Completed 3/19/18)
  • General copyediting (Completed 3/20/18)
    • Fix run-on sentences (Completed 3/20/18)
  • Check references (Completed 3/2/18)
  • Check for bias (Completed 3/2/18)
    • Fix certain broad claims (Completed 3/20/18)


Problems

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  • Doesn't read like a Wikipedia article -- more like a research paper
  • Citations don't follow Wikipedia Manual of Style
  • Some original research

To-Do List

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  • General copyediting (Completed 3/20/18)
  • Check references (Completed 3/2/18)
    • Change some in-text citations to follow Wikipedia Manual of Style (Completed 3/15/18)
  • Check for bias (Completed 3/2/18)
  • Evaluate subheadings -- some are a bit short (Completed 3/15/18)
    • Restructure layout (Completed 3/15/18)
  • Get rid of original research (3/21/18)
  • Add history section (Completed 3/15/18)