User:Kmol2023/Ruth Kajander/Iwishmycatcouldtalk Peer Review
General info
[edit]- Whose work are you reviewing?
Kmol2023
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- User:Kmol2023/Ruth Kajander
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Looks like this is a brand new article!
Lead
[edit]Since it looks like she was a member of the Order of Canada, she's entitled to have the little "CM" or "OC" next to her name (depending on what grade she was a part of).
The lead looks good to me- I know there are plenty of articles with long leads but since these articles are so short, I think keeping it really simple is okay.
Content
[edit]I know you may be limited by your sources- I certainly was. However, there are a few things I want to know that I was hoping maybe you could find?
- Who was she married to? Where does the name Kajander come from?
- Where did she go to school? Was this in Germany or Canada?
- What year did she start using the drug in London? (Also, I assume this was this hospital in London, Ontario? Victoria Hospital (London, Ontario) The article as it is now reads a little like she moved to England.)
Tone and Balance
[edit]I think the tone is great. Reads like a regular Wikipedia article to me.
Organization
[edit]I think the spelling and grammar looks good. The way the article is organized is good too, though I wish there was a little bit more under early life to balance it out.
Some things I would crosslink:
Images and Media
[edit]That photo of her from her obituary is so cool! Do you think there's a way you could find the copyright owner and get permission to use it?
For New Articles Only
[edit]Here are some ideas for places you could add links to your new page so it's not an orphan (though this might be a little complex, but since your article is pretty good quality, I'm sure you'll be just fine):
On the page for Chlorpromazine
Lists of Canadians, Göttingen (under notable people) or List of people from Oshawa?
Overall impressions
[edit]It's cool that you did an article from scratch!