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Notes on Paleoclimatology:
-The study of changes to the environment throughout Earth's history
-Studied through records of ice, sediment, vegetation and trees
Evaluation:
This article is very informative and concise, however its introductory paragraph and history sections are lacking in content. Almost no historical information has been provided. Quite a bit more detail should be added to complete the sections.There are also a few value statements within the body of the text that should be removed to eliminate bias or a persuasive nature. The lead to the main body text is vague and uninformative. The section titled "Internal Processes and Forcings" could be rewritten in a clearer manner and some grammatical errors are present throughout the body of the article that need corrected. All links throughout the text are functioning, however there are several sections that lack citations. There is also some out of date information in this article such as references from 2004. How and by whom was the study of paleoclimatology was discovered? What limitations are associated with ice core records? This claim should have further support.
~~~~KeyanaA