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Article Evaluation

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  • Neonatology
  • Article is clear throughout the beginning, but towards the end it explains the cost of a maternal/neonatal infant stays and I don't think that was necessary to include.
  • The article stays unbiased throughout,only states the facts of neonatology and does not state any opinions
  • All of the links in the article work and the source does support the claims made in the article
  • All facts are cited and come from neutral, factual sources
  • When talking about the mean hospital costs of the average stay of an infant or mother, the data is from 2012 and has probably increased in the last 6 years
  • I think the article should've included the training that neonatologist have to go through after they are out of school and the research aspect of neonatology.
  • The talk page isn't very active at all on this article
  • This article overall achieves the rhetorical objective and does a good job of informing the reader