User:Joelonex/747 Supertanker/HMW.1995 Peer Review
I am reviewing a draft by user Joelonex, User:Joelonex/747 Supertanker
[edit]The user has added a couple sentences which appear relevant to the topic and up-to-date. The material is neutral, but does need to be checked for grammar. There is also a reference which appears in the middle of a word, the same reference appears to be another wikipedia article rather than an outside source. The other reference is valid and contains information to help the user build on the ideas of the 747 Supertanker article.
It is not clear however, what the user is thinking of adding after this composition of material, and how they will make an impact on the article other than adding the sentences.
First sentence in the composition is good for the lead in the article however.
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