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Evaluating Articles and Sources

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Work-life balance:

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Evaluation:

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- I feel that having separate paragraphs in the beginning would be better. Example, the common definition of work-life balance and then a separate paragraph or section about the history of the term.

- The percentages was very confusing because it was one run-on sentence rather than being broken up to relevant information.