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[edit]Work-life balance:
[edit]Evaluation:
[edit]- I feel that having separate paragraphs in the beginning would be better. Example, the common definition of work-life balance and then a separate paragraph or section about the history of the term.
- The percentages was very confusing because it was one run-on sentence rather than being broken up to relevant information.
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