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Students in Human Traditions: Gender and Politics - Assignment Due 9/22 - Below Paste Links to the Article you have edited and the Talk Page you have commented on. Be sure to identify yourself using your signature. (Like this - --Jdenbow (talk) 01:00, 20 September 2011 (UTC))

I made an edit to this article: Bassae. http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Bassae.--user:ddebiasi/ddebiasi.

I made an edit to this article: [[Sla--Ashley.harrison21 (talk) 17:06, 6 October 2011 (UTC)m_poetry]] I edited the same p--Ashley.harrison21 (talk) 17:13, 6 October 2011 (UTC)age's talk page: Talk:Poetry_slam --Kayla hope (talk) 18:21, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

I made an edit to this article: Gillette_Stadium http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Gillette_Stadium--user:ddebiasi/ddebiasi.

I have made an edit to this article: Shabbat And a edit to this talk page: Talk:Classics --Htulkoff (talk) 13:16, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

I have made an edit to this article: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Troy_(film) --user:ddebiasi/ddebiasi

I have made an edit to this article:Fort Wetherill And I've commented on this article's talk page: Talk:Narcissism To see all my edits go to my user page: User:Speterson6 --Speterson6 (talk) 20:52, 22 September 2011 (UTC)Shelby Peterson

I've made 7 edits to this article:Hold_That_Ghost And I've commented on this article's talk page: Hold_That_Ghost To see all my edits go to my user page: --Swalrus007 (talk) 02:34, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit to this article: une.e And I've commented on this article's talk page: --Jdenbow (talk) 19:10, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit to this article: Backpack And I've commented on this article's talk page: Talk:Facebook Eamodeo (talk) 21:10, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit to this article: Kalona, IA And I've made a comment on this talk page: Black_Athena --LittleDuck17 (talk) 23:42, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

I've also made a comment on this talk page: Green_Bay_Packers--LittleDuck17 (talk) 23:55, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit to this article: Cumberland,_Maine And I've also commented on this article's talk page: Talk:Schema_(psychology) --Kerri grant (talk) 01:15, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit on this article:University of New England And I also commented on this talk page:[Talk Page] ---Lnickerson1 (talk) 01:53, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit to this article: Pinkerton Academy And I've commented on the same article. --Bissonar (talk) 02:16, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit on this article: Presque Isle High School And I've commented on this talk page: Royal Wedding 2011 --Kireland1 (talk) 02:37, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit to the article: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Chocolate_milk--Bpio075 (talk) 02:08, 24 September 2011 (UTC) I've made a comment on the article: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Talk:Ancient_Greece--Bpio075 (talk) 02:08, 24 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit on this article: Kennebunkport,_Maine And I've comments on the same article's talk page. --User:Ashley.harrison21

I've made an edit on this article: Classics And I've commented on this talk page: Talk:Black_Athena#POV Lbeaulieu1 (talk) 22:47, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit on this article[[1]] And I've commented on this talk pagehttp://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Talk:C._F._Martin_%26_Company --Nopolski (talk) 23:01, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit on this article: Monmouth Academy I've also posted on this talk page: Talk:Monmouth_Academy_(Maine) --(Kmstevens (talk) 03:24, 22 September 2011 (UTC))

I have made an edit to this page: [[2]] --Klabbe21 (talk) 22:51, 20 September 2011 (UTC). I have made a comment to this page: [[3]] --Klabbe21 (talk) 22:51, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit on this article : Swimming (sport) I also commented on the talk page: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Talk:Swimming_%28sport%29#Yards_or_Metres.3F --Kcollins11 (talk) 15:52, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

I've made a grammar edit on the article Vernon Township, New Jersey and commented on Cookie Monster

I've made an edit on this article http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Fryeburg_fair and commented on its talk page.--Ashley.harrison21 (talk) 17:01, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

I've made a grammar edit on this article http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Thornton_Academy#Middle_school_added and comment on its talk page. --Ashley.harrison21 (talk) 17:06, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

I've made an edit on this article http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Arundel,_Maine and commented on its talk page. --Ashley.harrison21 (talk) 17:13, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

New Edits

Below, tell me about the 3 edits you've made to articles related to the course material. Make sure to click the signature and timestamp button so that I know who you are and when you edited this page.

I made an edit to this article on Phaedrus adding in info about his statements on shame/pride: Phaedrus --Speterson6 (talk) 04:22, 6 October 2011 (UTC) Shelby Peterson

I made an edit to the article http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Symposium_(Plato)#Aristophanes. http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Platonic_love#Amor_Platonicus http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/History_of_human_sexuality#Greece --Kayla hope (talk) 22:41, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I have made an edit to the article http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Greek_love --Htulkoff (talk) 15:10, 5 October 2011 (UTC)I have also made an edit to the symposium under the Eryximathus section on how love can cure the diseased http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/The_Symposium --Htulkoff (talk) 15:11, 5 October 2011 (UTC) I have made a final edit to Platonic Love and further emphasized the Greek idea of spiritual love and how that is the most sought out type of love. http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Platonic_love#Amor_Platonicus --Htulkoff (talk) 16:52, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I made 3+ edits to Black Athena . I changed around some sentences (created a new sentence and then re-worded another sentence) in the 1st paragraph and then made a grammar edit in the 7th paragraph. (added "of") --Lnickerson1 (talk) 02:08, 5 October 2011 (UTC--Lnickerson1 (talk) 03:12, 6 October 2011 (UTC) I have also made numerous grammatical corrections in The Classics in the section "History of the Western Classics."--Lnickerson1 (talk) 03:12, 6 October 2011 (UTC) Also, added in sentence in Ancient Greece about philosophy. Made sentence about Plato and Socrates and a snip-it about The Republic too.--Lnickerson1 (talk) 03:12, 6 October 2011 (UTC) Date: 10/5/11

I added a sentance on how men and women were to be taught the same things to this article: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/The_Republic_(Plato). I also made two edits to this article: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/The_Symposium. One was adding a few sentances about Eryximachus's speech to the God of Love. The other edit was adding a few sentances about Aristophanes' speech to the God of Love. --LittleDuck17 (talk) 18:41, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

I made multiple edits to the fallowing article, including adding a entirely new paragraph, fallowed by minor edits. http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Aristophanes#Biography --Kcollins11 (talk) 01:56, 6 October 2011 (UTC) 21:52, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

I have made edits to this wikipedia article: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Athenian_democracy. I made edits in the section about 'citizenship in Athens. I talked about the rights of women and also the percentage of the population that actually participated in the government. I also made edits to this wikipedia article: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Symposium_(Plato)#Pausanias. I made edits in the section about Pausanias, the last three sentences in the first paragraph. --Kbeisaw (talk) 23:18, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

I have made edits about how the seagul is a protected species to this wikipedia article: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Gull --Kerri grant (talk) 02:18, 4 October 2011 (UTC) I have also made an edit to the page: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Greely_High_School and added information about the athletics. --Kerri grant (talk) 23:14, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I have made an edit about classical Greek architecture, as well as a few grammatical corrections.Classical Greece--Bissonar (talk) 00:55, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I have made an edit about the Greek Parthenon and its relation to the Athenian power at the time.Parthenon--Bissonar (talk) 00:54, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I have grammatically corrected a sentence and added how once love is attained, it should be protected under the Eryximachus section in Plato's Symposium. Symposium --Kireland1 (talk) 01:00, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I have redefined Aphrodite's role, including being the goddess of pleasure as well as procreation. I have also stated that in most depicted images she is in, she often in the nude to represent her immense beauty.Aphrodite--Bissonar (talk) 01:04, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I have included that Athenian women are allotted a dowry from their father to insure their preservation. Classical Athens --Kireland1 (talk) 01:25, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I made grammatical edits to Plato's Republic and added that it explores the idea of justice, and the ideal city state. The Republic --Kireland1 (talk) 01:51, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I have added a statement concerning the topics of discussion at the Symposium [[4]]. I added a sentence explaining that Martha Nussbaum used Plato's Symposium and discussions with Socrates as a way of supporting her claims during the ruling [[5]]. Lastly, I added a statement concerning Phaedrus and his idea that there were military advantages concerning male-male couples. [[6]]Eamodeo (talk) 03:48, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

In this article : http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/The_Republic_(Plato) I reworded the first paragraph in order to make it more accuarate. I also rewrote a paragraph a ways into the article. Lastly I edited a few mistakes and clarified some content.--Khackett1 (talk) 22:53, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I made two edits to this article: http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Black_Athena#Reception. One grammatical and one that helped clarify the topic sentence of a paragraph. --Nopolski (talk) 23:51, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I have added onto these three pages: Symposium (Plato), Gender, The Republic (Plato) --Klabbe21 (talk) 00:06, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

I have made an edit to this page (http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Greek_love#Ancient_Greek_background)in the section about ancient greek background. I talked about how same sex relationships were common, and how your sexual orientation wasn't your identity. --Kbeisaw (talk) 00:54, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

I made multiple edits to the fallowing page on Aristophanes including adding an addition paragraph on the events of the symposium as well as making less intrusive edits throughout http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Aristophanes#Biography. --Kcollins11 (talk) 01:56, 6 October 2011 (UTC) 21:55, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

I have made a few edits on the symposium in the Pausanias section http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/The_Symposium --Bpio075 (talk) 02:14, 6 October 2011 (UTC) I made an edit to the page on Black Athena --Bpio075 (talk) 16:54, 6 October 2011 (UTC) I have made an edit to The Republic http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/The_Republic_(Plato)--Bpio075 (talk) 17:02, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

I 've made an edit to this page http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Classical_Greece and I edited the first two sentences under Classical Greece to make them flow better.--Swalrus007 (talk) 04:09, 6 October 2011 (UTC) I also made an edit to this article http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Parthenon and I added the word "virgin" to the first sentence of the article to make it more accurate. --Swalrus007 (talk) 04:09, 6 October 2011 (UTC) And lastly I made an edit to this article http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Symposium_(Plato) . I edited the Phaedrus Part by completing a sentence, and I got got rid of a fragment in the second to last sentence in the second paragraph.--Swalrus007 (talk) 04:09, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

I made an edit to this page http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Symposium_(Plato)#Aristophanes in the section about Aristophanes's speech further explaining the quest for wholeness. In http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Gender#Social_gender I related one's expectations and social roles related to biological sex. In http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Black_Athena#Reception I helped clarify the topic sentence of the paragraph.Lbeaulieu1 (talk) 04:21, 6 October 2011 (UTC)