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Wikipedia's Pink (Victoria's Secret) article for ENGL1101.29

Analysis of Article

While reading the original wiki article I noticed that the article was very outdated. PINK has an every changing brand and the article does not justify this. Many of the products PINK sells where not listed and the original article did not include the 2015 spokes model for the brand Rachel Hilbert. To improve this article I'm going to jazz up the introduction I'm going to mention the products they sell, mention PINK nation and the brand spokes model Rachel Hilbert.

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https://www.victoriassecret.com/pink

ALEXANDER, DAN. (10/20/2014). VICTORIA’S OTHER SECRET..^[1]
Leah, Melby. (6/ 12/2015). Victoria's Secret Pink's Newest Model Dishes on Her Favorite Jeans and Shopping Holy Grail^[2]
Rozhon, Tracie. (10-25-2002). A Lingerie Maker Returns to its Racier Past.^[3]
Merrick, Amy. Apparently, You Can Be Too Sexy.^[4]

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On October 16, 2002, Victoria's Secret announced the launch of Pink, a new lingerie line targeted to 15- to 22-year-olds.^[1] The strategy driving Victoria's Secret's launch of Pink is to introduce the teenage girls to Victoria's Secret stores.^[2] Pink sells underwear, sleepwear, loungewear, beauty products, and accessories, with the intent to transition buyers into more adult product lines, such as Angels, Very Sexy, and Body by Victoria.^[3]

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On October 16, 2002, the California based lingere company Victoria's Secret launched PINK, a fun, contemporary collegiate-geared brand line targeted for younger women. PINK is located inside the mother brand Victoria Secret selling collections such as bras, panties, swim, apparel, accessories, dorm, beauty and college and pro. Pink Nation is the ultimate destination for PINK fans, members get in on exclusive offers. Rachel Hilbert is the official spokes model for PINK.

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Victoria's Secret shoppers pay the company back with loyalty.^[1] Victoria’s Secret is already famous globally, not because of its stores but because of its seductive models, who hail from around the world.^[1] Twenty year old Model Rachel Hilbert is the recent beauty to appear on the front of Victoria's Secret PINK.^[2]Victoria's Secret's disclosed it would soon introduce a lingerie line called Pink for the 15- to 22-year-old market.^[3] With the success of PINK, which begun in 2002 and aimed to propose college students to Victoria's Secret stores, PINK has grown excessively.^[4]

Notes

^ ^a ^b ^c Wikipedia reference created with Cite tool
^ ^a ^b "11 Questions With the New Face of Victoria's Secret PINK". Glamour. Retrieved 2015-11-03.
^ ^a ^b Rozhon, Tracie (2002-10-25). "A Lingerie Maker Returns To Its Racier Past". The New York Times. ISSN 0362-4331. Retrieved 2015-10-28.
^ ^a ^b Merrick, Amy. "Apparently, You Can Be Too Sexy". Wall Street Journal. ISSN 0099-9660. Retrieved 2015-10-28.

[:0-1] Wikipedia reference created with Cite tool

[:4-2] "11 Questions With the New Face of Victoria's Secret PINK". Glamour. Retrieved 2015-11-03.

[:2-3] Rozhon, Tracie (2002-10-25). "A Lingerie Maker Returns To Its Racier Past". The New York Times. ISSN 0362-4331. Retrieved 2015-10-28.

[:3-4] Merrick, Amy. "Apparently, You Can Be Too Sexy". Wall Street Journal. ISSN 0099-9660. Retrieved 2015-10-28.

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