User:Jasonguoo/Don't Yell at Me/Maiab3 Peer Review
General info
[edit]- 1. Whose work are you reviewing?
- Jasonguoo
- 2. Link to draft you're reviewing
- - LINK HERE
- 3. Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- N/A (new article)
Evaluate the drafted changes
[edit]- Lead
- The lead is succinct and straight to the point, but does not include a brief description of the rest of the content on the page (mentions that it is based in Taipei, but only has a focus for its first location in Seattle).
- While the article mentions that it is a chain, it doesn't talk about the global aspect.
- Content
- The content added was relevant, up-to-date and overall a good choice for the article.
- The article would benefit from a section about the founders, history of the shop, etc.
- This article does not dal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps.
- Tone and Balance
- The content added is neutral and has no claims that are bias.
- There are no viewpoints that are under/overrepresented, as the article is mainly about the location of the bubble tea store.
- Sources and References
- The content is backed up from a variety of sources that are reputable, and the content does accurately reflect what is inside the article.
- The sources are current and have a diverse group of authors, and all the links work!
- Organization
- The content is well written, and there are no grammatical/spelling errors.
- The article is also appropriately broken down into the sections that reflect the major points of the topic.
- Images + Media
- The images include a brand logo, storefront, and bubble tea picture-- they all work together to create a comprehensive picture of the bubble tea shop and are visually appealing.
- I'm not quite sure if the photos adhere to the copyright guidelines (as the pictures were taken from Facebook and a "personal believer), so I would just double check to be safe.
- New Articles
- The article does adhere to Wiki's notability requirements and has an exhaustive list of secondary sources (I'd say this list is fairly impressive given that it is a bubble tea shop).
- The article does link other articles like Capitol hill, Restaurants, University District and even a drink portal for discoverability.
- Overall Impressions
- Great job for starting a new article! It looks great and you did a wonderful job.
- Again, I feel that this article could benefit from a 'history' or 'founders' subsection, just for an added "umph!"
- This article is succinct, well written and easily digestible. I really enjoyed learning a little bit more about this chain.