User:JasonZXH/OLES2129

I choose the topic of iPhone (https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=IPhone&oldid=17816485) and in this text it mainly talk about the advantage of the iPhone in the music aspect, more likely that those music on iPhone is much more cheaper. If I am the one who create this page first, I will add more advantage and the price of the iPhone compared to other phones that already exist on the market. Also, I might talk about the person who create and introduce this concept.

If I were the second editor , firstly I will also help the author to write in correct English, and then add more photo and how the create get the concept to create such a mobile phone compared to Motorola E398 , and also is it popular in the market , and also the feature about the iPhone and the market status