User:Icoulduseareallywishrightnow
Article Review
[edit]Ellen McLain has been one of my vocal coaches for about 3 years now, she is a famous voice actress known for video games such as PORTAL and PORTAL 2. Considering the fact that I know her personally, I decided to give this page a look and found some spots within the article where I saw I could add some greater detail those areas include: Personal Life, Career, and Filmography.
Personal Life
[edit]The Personal Life Information on the Ellen McLain article was lacking. The only information that was mentioned was about her husband and his works. Considering the fact that I know her, I added that she teaches vocal technique and performance at theatres local to her. There wasn't a way for me to link a source, unless I was to link the actual theatre group's website and I didn't want to disclose personal info about the actual location for Ellen's privacy.
Career
[edit]The Career Information on the actrile included her works in gaming, as well as film. All information was clear and accurate. I added some additional information however about one of Ellen's films: Winning Dad. I also included some background on Ellen's YouTube channel
Filmography
[edit]I noticed that this section was accurate for the information that it had on it. (I asked Ellen personally and did research to confirm). However, I noticed a credit that was missing, so I simply filled it in the table. I added a credit into the 2017 section of the table, she appeared in a video on YouTube playing her recurring and infamous GLaDOS.
Summary
[edit]Overall, This page was decent, The information that was provided was accurate, however there is a lot of information that could be added. Some of the areas I would consider "weak" as in there are only a few pieces of information provided. Citations were clear and correct as well. I may have to go back in as I talk to Ellen more, it's a good page that deserves rich Information!
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