User:Iadmc/(factsheet) Murder of Denise Amber Lee
Appearance
Basic facts and article issues
[edit]- Denise Amber Lee was murdered by Michael King on January 17, 2008; the crime followed his kidnapping and raping her earlier in the day.
- Correct and easily sourced
- Lee and several others had attempted to call for help through the 9-1-1 system but there was a lack of communication and the police and other emergency services arrived too late.
- Correct and easily sourced but needs clarification (how was there a lack of communication?)
- At least four 911 calls were made, one by Lee herself from her abductor's phone and one from a witness, Jane Kowalski, the latter giving a detailed account of events as they unfolded before her.
- Actually five by five different callers including the victim.
Done in lead;
Not done in other sections (see below)
- Actually five by five different callers including the victim.
- Particulars of the crime (see the subpages /The crime and /The Crime (Basic English rewrite)
- Essentially correct but text needs a massive rewrite so it does not look like a witness statement but is rather an encyclopedic account of events
- Particulars of the trial (see the subpage /The trial)
- Ditto Particulars of the crime
- The aftermath and parallel developments (see the subpage /The aftermath)
- The facts need to be massively expansed upon: enormous amounts of work have been done both by the family and the authorities to address the various failings, In particular:
- Denise Amber Lee Act and potential further FL State Law
- Former is voluntary; latter would seek to make certification and training mandatory for all 9-1-1 call takers and dispatchers in FL
- New section needed to discuss these developments
- Denise Amber Lee Foundation
- Clear but needs minor copyediting and rewording
- Sponsorship of same by Gulf Coast Community Foundation of Venice
- Needs adding and citing as an important fact
- Parallel developments in other countries/states etc
- Need looking into and adding if relevent. Eg, there was a similar situation in Australia recently
- Denise Amber Lee bio
- Nathaniel Alan Lee (but probably stick with Nathan Lee for now).
Done Rest needs minor expansion but fine for now
- Nathaniel Alan Lee (but probably stick with Nathan Lee for now).
- Photograph of Lee
- In hand (need clarification of copyright procedures)
- Michael King bio
- Expand if possible
- Photograph of King
- Only to be added if Lee's photo is added and only then if deemed appropriate
- Tags
- OR tag was possibly correct at time of placement but made inaccurate now by the many new refs and ELs
Done refactored tag to include only {{cleanup}}
- Cleanup is in hand
- OR tag was possibly correct at time of placement but made inaccurate now by the many new refs and ELs
- Orphaned article
- Need to find other articles to link to this article
- Possibilities include: articles on similar crimes, articles on similarly mishandled crimes, articles on similar bills, articles on authorities discussing similar situations and bills etc
Links for above
[edit]{{cite}}
Format (better on one line, paragraphed for convenience in example):
<ref name = "example">{{cite [news, web, etc] |url=http://www.example.com |title=Example |last=Jones|first=Jane|coauthors=Jack Dee, Julia Roberts |date=20 January 2007 |work=Newspaper|publisher=Publisher |pages=1-1000|language=English [if needed] |accessdate=5 March 2010|location=Sandbox }}</ref>
Or more specific info can be included if necessary ("-link" fields are to link to WP entries) More info here:
<ref name = "example">{{Citation | last = Bloggs | first = Joe | author-link = Joe Bloggs (journalist) | publication-date = | date = | year = | title = | periodical = | series = | publication-place = | place = | publisher = | volume = | issue = | pages = | page = | at = | url = | archiveurl = | archivedate = | issn = | pmid = | pmc = | doi = | oclc = | accessdate = | ref = }}</ref>
NB - If the title, url etc includes [square brackets], these must be encoded: [ → [
; ] → ]
This may apply to other characters also.
References
[edit]- "HT DAL Act passed" - "'Denise Amber Lee Act' clears Senate". HeraldTribune. Thursday, April 24. Retrieved 1 March 2010.
{{cite news}}
: Check date values in:|date=
(help) - "Denise Amber Lee Act" - "CS/SB 1694 - 911 Emergency Dispatchers [SPCC]". Florida House of Reprentatives. Retrieved 5 March 2010.
- "NBC-2 King sentence" - Brahney, Marisa (Dec 04, 2009). "Michael King sentenced to death". NBC-2 News Online. WorldNow and WBBH. Retrieved 1 March 2010.
{{cite news}}
: Check date values in:|date=
(help) - "dateline transcript" - Murphy, Dennis (7 June 2008). "The detective's daughter (transcript of Dateline episode)". msnbc.com. Retrieved 1 March 2010.
- "HT on verdict" - Eckhart, Robert (August 28, 2009). "Michael King found guilty of first-degree murder of Denise Lee". Herald Tribune. Retrieved 1 March 2010.
- "CNN penalty" - O'Neill, Ann (28 August 2009). "Jury: Death for man who murdered cop's daughter". CNN.com. Cable News Network. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
- "UPI followup" - "Jury recommends death for kidnap, killing". UPI.com. United Press International, Inc. Sept. 4, 2009. Retrieved 1 March 2010.
{{cite web}}
: Check date values in:|date=
(help) - "HT breaking" - Staff Reporter (January 20, 2008). "Denise Amber Lee shot and tossed in a shallow grave". HeraldTribune. p. 3. Retrieved 1 March 2010.
- "911 dispatch" - Anon (February 19, 2009). "Denise Lee Kidnap-Murder". Dispatch Magazine On-line. Retrieved March 10, 2010.
- "MSC day two" - "An emotional day two in Michael King murder trial". WorldNow and WWSB. August 25, 2009. Retrieved 1 March 2010.
- "MSC 911" - Anon (25 August 2009). "911 call from woman who followed Michael King released". WorldNow and WWSB. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
- "HT Map" - McCarthy, Barry. "Map of crime scene". HeraldTribune.com. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
- "CNN 911" - O'Neill, Ann (28 August 2009). "Woman's frantic 911 call helps convict her killer". CNN.com. Cable News Network. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
- "HT jury" - Carroll, Scott (4 September 2009). "King should die, jury recommends". HeraldTribune. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
- "dateline timeline" - Anon (June 6, 2008). "Calls of distress". Dateline NBC. msnbc.com. Retrieved 7 March 2010.
- "ABC botched" - Avila, Jim (July 23, 2008). "Are Botched 911 Calls to Blame for Denise Lee's Death?". ABC News. ABC News Internet Ventures. pp. 1–4. Retrieved March 7, 2010.
{{cite news}}
: Unknown parameter|coauthors=
ignored (|author=
suggested) (help) - "SPT crime report" - Anton, Leonora LaPeter (April 18, 2008). "North Port mother died as deputies were left unaware". St. Petersburg Times. Retrieved March 8, 2010.
{{cite news}}
: Unknown parameter|coauthors=
ignored (|author=
suggested) (help) - "ABC reform report" - Zak, Sarah (2010). "Murder victim's husband takes reform battle to the Senate". ABC (Scripps TV Station Group). Retrieved 2010-03-01.
- "NC7 911 bill" - Vasilinda, Mike (Feb 17, 2010). "Denise Amber Lee Act Clears Committee". News Channel 7. Gray Television, Inc. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
- "NBC-2 911 bill" - Anon (Feb 16, 2010). "9-1-1 bill passes through first House committee". NBC-2 News Online. WorldNow and WBBH. Retrieved March 6, 2010.
- "CS/HB 355" - "CS/HB 355 - Public Safety Telecommunicators". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved 5 March 2010.
- "CS/SB 742" - "CS/SB 742 - Public Safety Telecommunicators/E911 [SPSC]". Florida House of Reprentatives. Retrieved 5 March 2010.
- "BH bill" - Bonfiglio, Jim (3 March 2010). "Support bill that requires 911 training". bradenton.com. Bradenton Herald. pp. 1–2. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
External links
[edit]- Official websites and relevant blogs
- Official website - The non-profit organization started by Lee's widower.
- Official website - Sponsors of the Denise Amber Lee Foundation
- Official website
- Peggy Lee's Blogspot - Blogspot set up by mother-in-law of Denise Amber Lee
- Further reading
- Denise Lee slaying Topic page of Sarasota Herald-Tribune website, 2008
- Frantic calls for help fail to save Lee Breaking News, Sarasota Herald-Tribune; January 22, 2008; John Davis and Zac Anderson
- North Port Police never learned about key 911 call in Lee case Breaking News, Sarasota Herald-Tribune; February 8, 2008; John Davis
- State Bureau of EMS highlights (PDF) page 3, rule development workshop on Senate Bill 1694, Florida Bureau of Emergency Medical Services, July 2008
- The legacy of Denise Amber Lee Sarasota Herald-Tribune; January 18, 2009
- Prosecutor: Denise Amber Lee was tied to headboard in King’s car Naples News; August 24, 2009; Elaine Allen-Emrich
- Denise Lee 911 Call Played at Michael King Murder Trial NowPublic.com; August 26, 2009; Jordan Yerman
- Chaos Theory Fire Chief; Nov 1, 2009; Glenn Bischoff
- Denise Amber Lee Topic page of Sarasota Herald-Tribune website, 2010, containing extensive links to other articles
- Committee passes bill to require more training for 911 operators Tampa Bay Reporter Online, Michael D. Vasilinda; February 16, 2010
- More training for North Port 911 center Sarasota Herald-Tribune; February 17, 2010
- Husband Pushes for Tougher 911 Dispatcher Training First Coast News; February 18, 2010; Len Kiese and Taren Reed
- 911 Emergency Dispatcher Program Florida Bureau of Emergency Medical Services
- Direct links to relevant Statutes, Laws, Acts and Bills
- The 2009 Florida Statutes - 401.465 911 emergency dispatcher certification Florida Legislature
- The 2009 Florida Statutes - Chapter 401 Florida Legislature
- Note - The following are all formatted in PDF
- "HB 997". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
- "CS/HB 997". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
- "SB 1694". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
- "CS/SB 1694". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
- "Denise Amber Lee Act enrolled". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
- "HB 355". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
- "CS/HB 355". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
- "SB 742". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
- "CS/SB 742". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
- Removed because neither relevent nor current. Potential conflict of interest with participants in forum and poll, also, among other things
Further useful links
[edit]- Pain turns into action John Davis; Herald Tribune; September 26, 2008
- 9-1-1 bill passes through first House committee NBC-2 Online; February 16, 2010
- Husband Pushes for Tougher 911 Dispatcher Training Len Kiese, Taren Reed; First Coast News; February 18, 2010
- Woman's murder prompts 9-1-1 reform bill 10 Connects
- Florida House of Representatives (watch for updates)
- Bill being pushed will raise standards for 911 call takers ABC 27
- Mother of 2 Believed Abducted From Florida Home Fox News; January 18 2008
- Denise Amber Lee Slaying HeraldTribune (unknown date/author)
- More training for North Port 911 center John Davis; February 17 2010; HeraldTribune Note - crucial explains how an unrelated case helped push for further training etc
- Denise Lee Murder useful timeline of basic events (not for article though, I suspect)
- Juror13 useful personal site to help discover more facts to verify