User:HitroMilanese/Archive17
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Review draft:Fredokiss[edit]Hie Can you please review my article draft:Fredokiss thank you. Phalombe (talk) 00:17, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
Help with draft:Garden Mart[edit]Hello I am not sure what you exactly mean in the review of the article that I've submitted. ' See WP:CORPDEPTH. Most of the presented sources are WP:PRIMARY'
If the submitter is not sure what the reviewer wants, it would be a good idea to discuss with the reviewer rather than just resubmitting (and annoying the reviewers). I thought it would be a good idea for me to get some advice from you because I don't want to waste the time of any reviewers.
Helo, can you please help me ? Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, i cant understand these part. My article has been published from 2016 and how now is not a neutral point of view ? Your submission at Articles for creation: Elmedin Ademi (December 10) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Katerina.josivoska (talk • contribs) 15:29, 12 December 2020 (UTC)
Want to discuss before resubmitting[edit]Hello there, Hope you are doing good. I have tried to add some new references in my draft. Please have a look and let me know if I can submit it for a review. Thanks. https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Draft:Mudasir_Zafar FilmIndia2020 14:09, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
Need help with a draft[edit]Hi Can you please review my article Draft:Yaacov_Heller https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Draft:Yaacov_Heller thank youEKP1234 (talk) 06:14, 15 December 2020 (UTC)Eric
Thank you very much. I provided quite a few references as Yaacov has been a global artist for more than 45 years. I have been thorough and integrated as many as possible including the most recent documentary with Ben Ferencz. I look forward to your feedback. Eric EKP1234 (talk) 16:48, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
Draft: Jessica Gethin[edit]Hi Hitro, thank you for your comments on fixing the referencing technique by going to WP: REFB. I am very new to Wiki and trying to sort this out. Will give it a go and hope to get the technique up to par.--Angela Ong (talk) 06:17, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
Draft about Paysera[edit]Hello HitroMilanese, Please re-review my article Draft:Paysera. I have included a number of mentions in different reliable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Frequency33 (talk • contribs) 09:15, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
Hi HitroMilanese, 20 references from 17 different, reliable sources, including an appearance at official webpages of Apple, Shopify, Central Bank as well as well-known fintech-focused media, like Finextra and The Fintech Times. How that possible not to be enough. Ok, the question does not necessarily require an answer but facts speak for themselves - articles in Wikipedia exist with much less coverage. For example https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Easypaisa Frequency33 (talk) 09:50, 28 January 2021 (UTC) Draft: Feng Tang[edit]Hi, Hitro, sorry for my late update. Could you please help to review the draft: Feng Tang again.(https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Draft:Feng_Tang). I have made the updates according to your comments. Many thanks.
Hi, Hitro, many thanks for your comments. I have revised and could you please go to take a look again. Thanks and wish you have a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! — Preceding unsigned comment added by CherryChan2020 (talk • contribs) 08:00, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
Hi, Hitro, Many many thanks for your help. I have re-submitted and hope it will be ok. ^.^ — Preceding unsigned comment added by CherryChan2020 (talk • contribs) 08:52, 4 January 2021 (UTC) Draft:LEViT∆TE (declined)[edit]hello HitroMilanese, thank you for your time. You recently declined a new wiki entry of mine. I would like to mention a couple of things, if you don't mind... please bare with me I am not too familiar with the messaging function here.
1. Does not appear to meet WP:MUSICBIO independently. 2. Listed Billboard charting is associated with Bassnectar.
To address reason 2: Yes, the billboard charting is associated with Bassnectar... However, this is because two the albums that charted, one of them being 'Unlimited', has a song co-created by the artist of this wiki, LEViT∆TE. If you read the top paragraph, LEViT∆TE collaborated with Bassnectar on two separate albums, both of which peaked at #1 on Billboard Electronic Music charts. The reference shows these albums and that they peaked #1. I also referenced a wiki entry of the 'Unlimited' album that shows LEViT∆TE in the track list. (I can add a reference to the second album that features a Bassnectar & LEViT∆TE song. Knowing this, does that make any difference? Or what would you suggest I change/delete/etc to improve chances of approval? Thanks for your insight, it is helping me create a better article. If I may, I would like to request that this not be deleted. I will make whatever changes necessary. Thank you! Theseth444 (talk) 07:25, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
Draft:Passion's Price[edit]Hi, I added a better reference of an article for the "Passion's Price" page, so is the page acceptable now? I did the page because there is a "red link" for it (the 1st of the 3 albums listed on the Diva Destruction page says "Passion's Price" in red letters). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cp147 (talk • contribs) 03:34, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
Hi, thanks and can you please help me pick a few of the best references out of these? Thanks. https://groundcast.com.br/09-discos-goticos-que-fazem-20-anos-em-2019/ Article Title: “9 Gothic disks that turn 20 in 2019” (English version) “Just like last year, I present to you a very nice list of gothic records from 1999. This year there are many great classics of the genre” “Each title has a link to Spotify, if you want to hear these excellent works.” “Diva Destruction -Passion’s Price” “Diva Destruction is one of my favorite gothic rock groups, especially for the well-made mix with electronic music and alternative rock.” https://www.wrappedinwire.com/D/DivaDestruction.htm http://www.erbadellastrega.it/divadestruction/ https://www.wikiwand.com/de/Gothic_Rock https://www.underground-empire.com/review.php?idx=798 http://almayarma.blogspot.com/2009/03/diva-destruction-passions-price.html https://www.gutsofdarkness.com/god/objet.php?objet=3295 http://old.gothic.ru/music/review/11-11-00_e.htm https://www.metal.de/news/diva-destruction-44908/ http://cementeriobibliografico.blogspot.com/2011/05/diva-destruction.html https://www.darkside.ru/album/7774/ https://www.versacrum.com/vs/2003/03/diva-destruction-exposing-the-sickness.html https://www.spirit-of-metal.com/fr/album/Passion_Price/9065 http://www.synthema.ru/2007/03/23/diva_destruction__passions_price_1999.html https://gothic.com.ua/Articles/1513.html https://www.amazon.com/Passions-Price-Diva-Destruction/dp/B00008I2CG https://www.last.fm/music/Diva+Destruction https://in-the-fog.ru/albums/15089-diva-destruction-passions-price-2001.html https://www.versacrum.com/vs/2003/04/diva-destruction.html http://hanksville.org/storytellers/VanCamp/writing/Sickness.html http://testicanzoni.mtv.it/testi-Diva-Destruction_19244/Passion's-Price-album_10301736 https://entertheshadows.com.br/artist/Diva+Destruction — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cp147 (talk • contribs) 01:37, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
Ashvin Gidvani[edit]Hi, Can you please let me know where you want me to cite the article? As I have placed all the verified link in reference. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Thedigitalcafe (talk • contribs) 06:13, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
User:Thereckonmusic[edit]Hey i got verified in my country and it's not conflicting any materials.If you don't want to accept me,it's okay. I will talk to Google. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Thereckonmusic (talk • contribs) 08:12, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
Hi, Thanks for reviewing the Addnode article at https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Draft:Addnode_Group. Unfortunately, it did not get accepted due to independent/reliable sources and notability. I have now updated the page, and used secondary articles and equity research website (Redeye), as well as the annual report published through the Swedish Financial Supervisory Authority - which should be considered reliable? As for the notability - yes the company is not as notable as Apple or Microsoft, but it is a public company employing around 1,600 people in europe. If it is still not meeting the standards, could you specify what needs to be changed? Happy holidays! Gustav Addnode (talk) 08:21, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
Article Review[edit]Hello Hitro, I did make changes draft and added more citations as you did suggest me before. please review the submission and let me know how can I improve the quality of the article. Draft Page: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Draft:Aashu_Patel
I did find the below-listed source competing with retirement mentioned on those pages. Also, it's meeting personal biography guidelines. Please do check it once and let me know if I missing something here. http://microsarjan.in/2019/08/15/interview/ https://sursamvaad.net.au/aashu-patel/ https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/hindi/bollywood/news/Tigmanshu-Dhulia-will-helm-a-film-based-on-Aashu-Patels-novel-Madam-X/articleshow/46930026.cms — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cgoju (talk • contribs) 16:34, 4 January 2021 (UTC) Regarding the decline of submission[edit]what exactly will be considered as reliable in term of business terms? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Neeku oj (talk • contribs) 15:44, 25 December 2020 (UTC)
Regarding my draft article not coming under notability[edit]I have created draft article Draft:FC Kolhapur City You have reviewed it and declined it because it doesn't come under notability but I know that it played in Indian Women's League which comes under notability of Indian football club's so please check again and approve it. Thanks ~~Shivsa008 Shivsa008 (talk) 03:50, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
Article declined![edit]Hello! I have created an biograpgypage of mine but every thing which i entered in my article is Real as i am a influencer currently i am having more than 7.9k followers on instagram but I also have 1M+ profile engagement which proved me that i am real. Sir please try to publish my biography in google. Thankyou regards. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ishaan 2460 (talk • contribs) 09:34, 2 January 2021 (UTC) Draft:Oluwaseyi Olufemi Emmanuel Submission declined![edit]Hello @HitroMilanese:, you dropped a comment saying this article does not appear to meet WP:MUSICBIO. Do you mean that if this subject has at least one of these criteria, the submission would be accepted? Trendrives (talk) 21:44, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
Draft:Shilbhadra Dutta[edit]I have provided resources now. Please review it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TTP1233 (talk • contribs) 08:38, 6 January 2021 (UTC) Help with draft for 'Burpple' article[edit]Hello! Thanks for reviewing my new article submission on 4 December 2020. I have revised the article for a more neutral stance and resubmitted the article. Hope to get your kind feedback on this :-) https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Draft:Burpple — Preceding unsigned comment added by Grimlay (talk • contribs) 02:30, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
Hello Hitro!
Thank you in advance for reviewing my request, Hitro. A belated Happy New Year and kind regards! — VVARO talk 20:32, 15 January 2021 (UTC) Dr. Michael J. Lenardo, M.D.[edit]Hi Hitro, Thank you for reviewing my draft about Dr. Michael Lenardo and your contribution. I am a new contributor to Wikipedia, and wanted to ask if there is anything I should do to help complete the review process. Thanks again and take care, Heather — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hecamo (talk • contribs) 02:22, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
Alessandro Avataneo's Page[edit]Dear HitroMilanese, I'm Viola, the author of the page about Alessandro Avataneo (here the draft link: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Draft:Alessandro_Avataneo). Thank you for the review and your suggestions. I've added some references. I hope they will be enough. I'm available for any changes. Thanks for your time. Viola Capriola — Preceding unsigned comment added by 151.32.239.186 (talk) 18:28, 23 January 2021 (UTC)
Charlie Burt Page[edit]Hello HitroMilanese, I am trying to build this page for Mr. Burt and am slowly adding more and more information. I have added several links to other sources other than direct interviews. Please work be kind during this process, I have not made one of these pages before. Thank you. ECP2016 (talk) 07:58, 27 January 2021 (UTC) Help on notability[edit]Hi HitroMilanese You have reviewed my article for Humanists Australia and rejected it for not being notable. The reason I felt the need to create the article is because Humanists Australia has been confused with the Council of Australian Humanist Societies (CAHS) by people searching for humanism in Australia, and especially by Google Search itself. If you google Humanists Australia the top two entries are associated with CAHS and the knowledge box that Google gleans from Wikipedia is a confusing mix of the Humanists Australia website and information from the wikipedia entry for CAHS. CAHS is historically important, but the future of Humanism in Australia lies with Humanists Australia. The Australian Humanist Societies that CAHS is the umbrella body for have been dwindling in number as you'll see by the edit history of the CAHS entry. For balance and to avoid confusion, if CAHS has an article, Humanists Australia needs one too. I have declared a conflict of interest here but I have tried to be impartial. I am a former President of CAHS in addition to being the Acting Chair of Humanists Australia. Is there anything I can do to prove the notability of Humanists Australia? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Magenta-meerkat (talk • contribs) 07:34, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
Hello HitroMilanese I learned that you are one of the reviewers for new articles in en-Wikipedia. It seems that you have all prerequisites: you like to support newcomers (I am a newcomer at EN, not DE), talk German, have an interest in astronomy and programming, hopefully image processing as well. Would you please have a look at the draft page PSS? What did I overlook which might not be of interest to amateur astronomers and would justify to have a only? Thanks for help! Tubas (talk) 19:51, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
How to improve wiki page[edit]What was the mistake in wiki page please suggest change. Royalsalanit (talk) 07:17, 1 February 2021 (UTC) Hive[edit]I think it is a pity that you removed my new article on the bookseller Hive. Hive, a subsidiary of a British book wholesaler, has been going for quite a few years now, and has been the only significant competitor to Amazon in the UK online bookseller market. There's been quite a lot of publicity in recent weeks for a new online bookseller in the UK, which looks at first sight to be another new British bookseller. It is, however, in fact an American one with a new British subsidiary. Because of the economic and population strength of the United States, Wikipedia tends to be rather dominated by American input, and it seems to be unfair in various ways for Wikipedia to be confined only to American booksellers selling online in United Kingdom, when there is a perfectly good domestic competitor. I have other things to do with my life then to write articles for you to delete, so I will not be doing anything further about it, but I feel that you should reflect more carefully before taking actions of this kind. I should add that I have no economic interest in or other connection of any kind with Hive or its owners. Deipnosophista (talk) 11:24, 1 February 2021 (UTC) 1008 water[edit]Hi, what need to be added to improve the draft to prepare to post. Thanks. Mig617 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mig617 (talk • contribs) 21:51, 14 February 2021 (UTC)
Finding a reliable source[edit]Hey HitroMilanese! My page submission was declined by you, and I would like to get some help. You left the message that all of the sources are unreliable. I used a source from the Hungarian National Press Service, does that also count as unreliable? There isn't much publicly available about the topic, how could I get the page to be published with the sources that are available? How can I convert the existing text to be usable with the existing sources? Is it possible to add "According to" or by using phrasing like that? --Kazo lev (talk) 12:43, 15 February 2021 (UTC)
Hello[edit]Hi can you give me amy tips on editing my page Kipblackston (talk) 07:45, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
Draft:Angry Prash[edit]He is a very popular internet personality, entertainer and influencer. He has millions of followers in India! Please try to understand. Many people try to find information about him. Also articles like this already exists on Wikipedia like articles about Indian YouTubers e.g. Dhruv rathee, Carryminati, Gaurav chaudhry etc. HeroNumberZero (talk) 08:02, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
Draft:Miracle Band[edit]Is that the subject is not accepted, no matter how i edit it, it cant pass? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Larry wu0920 (talk • contribs) 09:26, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
Article D.j. Mirko B.[edit]Hi ! I wrote the article on this Italian producer and deejay that according to him deserves a lot. but it is constantly being eliminated. as his is eliminated there would be many others to eliminate. However Wikipedia 'The free encyclopedia' is not a FREE ENCYCLOPEDIA, as there are reviewers who block your freedom of writing, which when an encyclopedia is "free" shouldn't even exist. So I highly recommend Wikipedia to change its name. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Durex223 (talk • contribs) 10:10, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
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