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I accessed to the air pods, the accessary of new iPhone. It was linked via human, and device interaction https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/AirPods. Even though the accessary is “new”, and a lot of people complained about it, the length of the information is quite short. The description of the earbud is somehow specific because mostly it is the hardware spec of this item like the weight, and battery life. However, the fact is not very objective. For example, there is an article about the battery life, but the link goes to someone’s blog that wrote about the personal review. The battery can last longer depends on the usage, and on the hardware, small differences. However, the blogger, one person data, cannot be accurate. Other than the personal blog, other references are written based on the fact that is announced by Apple developers. Introduction, hardware, and criticism were very straight to the point, and there was no distraction. The especially introduction was succinct. My only complaint is that the introduction is based on Apple’s description of air pods. This can be an issue of the neutralism because Apple will never introduce their product negatively. All the information come from either Apple website and tech blog. It is hard to say they are all neutral sources because some tech bloggers are apple fanboys, and blinded by Apple. But it cannot be changed since the experience of electronic gadgets is always in the center of controversial. Some people can see one device very handy and innovative while some might not; depends on their usage. The way the air pods in represented on this page is very informative and neutral as possible, therefore the editor did not make any mistake on the viewpoints. I personally think that adapting Siri agent on the air pods is very innovative, and smart. This movement shows that the “old” technology, Bluetooth still has a lot of potentials to grow. A lot of new technologies, nowadays, are either fed or disappear by the newer technology. As a viewpoint of the developer, it is very implausible that they made it work, however, some readers might think that my viewpoint of a combination of Siri and earbud is too overrepresented. This editor did not make the mistake. After checking all the links, they all worked fine and redirected to the right website. The article also includes the latest IOS update, and how it effects the hardware with proper link.
02/27/17
Week 3
In a plot section, it tells the general plot of the movie, however it does not have the "main description" which was introduced as a main plot of the movie that was introduced in Korea. I can translate it to English and edit in the page.
평범한 삶을 꿈꾼 순간, 모두의 표적이 된 남자!
[edit]2012년 가을, 그의 마지막 출근이 시작된다!
[edit]http://movie.naver.com/movie/bi/mi/basic.nhn?code=85659
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