User:Gallagherk104/sandbox
Article Evaluation
The definition of Annotated Bibliography wasn’t that strong or clear (when it came to the word entries)
Needs word with punctuation
The questions for each main component, some are just repeating the bolded points
Had very little sources/broken links
Wiki List
Sex Trafficking: There is a wiki page already created but the gang-controlled trafficking has very little information so I was thinking I would narrow in on that specific kind of trafficking. As for the regions that sex trafficking takes place there is no information on the United States.
Naloxone: Right now they have a good wiki page and each topic is filled with information so I think I would just contribute to each paragraph in small amounts
Vice Media: Include more information under the Properties of Vice Media
Stockholm Syndrome: I would want to go into detail about the developments of Stockholm syndrome and then the recovery of Stockholm.
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