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User:EthanSaef/Iu Mien Americans/Bfull342 Peer Review

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Whose work are you reviewing?
EthanSaef
Link to draft you're reviewing
User:EthanSaef/Iu Mien Americans
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Iu Mien Americans

Evaluate the drafted changes

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Hello EthanSaef,

You seem to be adding valuable information to Wikipedia about Iu Mien Americans. Good job!

The content in your lead can work well into the main article. I suggest deploying what you have and determine which section each fact would fit best in.

I'm noticing the lack of proper in-line citations in your draft. It is expected to have at least one citation per sentence. Wikipedia has a different standard for these citations compared to typical college write-ups. Check out WP:CS#Parenthetical referencing and WP:IC for more information.

Keep going!

--Bfull342