User:Ecassel/Ipas (organization)/Paigehel Peer Review
Peer review
[edit]This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
Overall impressions
[edit]Guiding questions:
- Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
- The content added has improved the overall quality of the article. The original article is very small and lacks a lot of information. This content adds a lot more and answers a lot more questions a reader would have if they had only read the original article.
- What are the strengths of the content added?
- The primary strength of this content is that is does a wonderful job of depicting the goals, policies, and focuses of Ipas. You really get a sense of what this organization stands for and what they aim to achieve.
- How can the content added be improved?
- I believe this article could be improved by elaborating on the lead section a bit more and adding more to the history. Adding more specific events and changes that stem from this organization could give even better insight to what this organization does for women.
Overall evaluation
[edit]Overall this added content is quite an improvement to the original, has a lot of great references, and does a great job of informing the reader about this organization.