User:D. Vase/Nursing/Aamna11 Peer Review
Peer review
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General info
[edit]- Whose work are you reviewing? D.Vase
- Link to draft you're reviewing: User:D. Vase/sandbox
Content
[edit]Your content is definitely very relevant, as there doesn't seem to be an existing subsection for Latin American nursing -- it would be nice to see more information about current action in the nursing setting in Latin America, for example, what the process to certification is, and if there is increased need for nurses within the Latin American health system(s) today.
Tone and Balance
[edit]The information is definitely neutral, to the point, and written well without any bias.
Sources and References
[edit]Every claim is backed with a source and the links work. Once of the sources is partially in Spanish, which shows that you have a diverse selection of your sources, and aren't limited to english language materials.
Organization
[edit]It is very well written and easy to read! I'm just not sure if the extra text box is part of the text or meant to be separate.
Overall impressions
[edit]Overall, the nursing article is very well developed, but is lacking sections about Latin American nursing practice, so it is important that you are filling that niche in. Your information is well balanced and neutral and the section is a good start! It can be improved with more specific information about Latin America.